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My first photomanipulation after lots of weeks. Well, I hope you like it. I think some things could be made better but I think it´s ok this way. But I have requested critiques. Let´s see what you have to say ;-) But please don´t be too hard with me....

:blackrose: Credits :blackrose:

=Nirelstock
Photo by: [link]
~PlumeNoire
Make-Up done with graphic tablet, little flames on the candels painted with mouse.


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Critiques


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Your concept is a very nice, classical goth theme that holds a resemblance to well known artists such as Victoria Frances.
All pieces you have used fit theme-wise perfect together. I like how you composed the image as well. The balance between your character and background elements is very harmonical and calm without being boring. Your light is very untypical for this genre, which let your composition stand out more and adds your personal style and fresh view to the often very dark goth artworks. Your color sheme is simple beautiful.
But I think that you could work a bit on the shadows to make everything look more natural. The candles in her hand should have a kind of "glow" and if your main light comes from above it would be a nice effect to darken the bottom of the picture and parts of your main figure a bit (more than it already is) and add some highlights to f.e. the hair to raise the dramatic in your lights.
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wow this is beautiful dear!:heart: great work! :clap: :clap:

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:iconblacklady999:
Thank you so much :hug:

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:iconenchanting-ce-memory:
youa re very welcome!:heart:

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Childhood is the kingdom where nobody dies :heart:

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:icondragonschest:
Fantastic Steffi, I love it... :clap:

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:iconblacklady999:
Thanks....:aww:

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:blackrose: My Fall Will Be For You :blackrose:
:blackrose: My Love Will Be In You :blackrose:
:blackrose: If You Be The One To Cut Me :blackrose:
:blackrose: I Will Bleed Forever :blackrose:

:blackrose: Ghost Love Score by Nightwish :blackrose:
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We must always match our faith with the truth, then it will move mountains...
:iconnirelstock:
Please add the link to the photographer

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:icondamarien:
Very nice work, but a little blur.
I was missing your works!

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:iconblacklady999:
:hug:

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:blackrose: My Fall Will Be For You :blackrose:
:blackrose: My Love Will Be In You :blackrose:
:blackrose: If You Be The One To Cut Me :blackrose:
:blackrose: I Will Bleed Forever :blackrose:

:blackrose: Ghost Love Score by Nightwish :blackrose:

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Canon
Canon PowerShot A80
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F/2.8
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Aug 9, 2005, 10:02:32 PM

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